Group Essay Collaboration

When I was writing my paragraph I found myself going back to redo so many different sections because of the following. I had issues with the commentary, the introducing the quote, and the thesis involvement. Now, the commentary was difficult because it seemed easier to just write it out as the summary type of layout. But the quote intro was interesting because you not only have to introduce the quote but you also have to embed the quote as well. Also, the thesis had to be connected to each part in at least one way so we had match every body's paragraphs to connect with each others as well as the thesis. The one thing that i did not see too much of was the problem of embedded quotes.What would be a good way to remind myself to steer clear of these issues? Do you have any solutions for me?