5 part extra credit

I have realized that the five part paragraphs are easily misunderstood but when you think about the order you are supposed to write in it becomes not so vague. I have figured out that the best way to write a five part paragraph correctly is to be in the right order at all times and to make sure every aspect has a full foundation to the topic sentence. In my five part paragraph these were the two heaviest pieces that I missed and now I know for this time to write everything with firm connections and making everything orderly and labeling the stanzas or pages the informatyion came from.